the killer
She was standing there,
Looking at me with disgust
I’ve seen anger before
But this expression was first
.
.
I was thinking of some excuse
But the brain was jammed
And she was staring judgmentally
Like I’ve been condemned
.
.
The crowd around me
Was unaware of her presence
They were celebrating loudly
But I was covered with silence
.
.
The feeling of triumph
In a click, vanished
The cheers were like
I was getting punished
.
.
I can no longer look
into her eyes full of hate
Coz I killed her mate
Just because he was a snake
.
.
PS:- It actualy happend in front of me, 9 years back when i was in school … The poor creature, unfortunately found its way to the playground from the bushes it was hiding with another one. And I couldn’t stop my “trying to be daredevil” friends…
PS:– I don’t if the other one was a she … assumed coz it add some drama to poem …
PS:— posting a poem after ages … no. of incomplete poems is around 12 … why can’t i complete my poems…
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Nagin ki script, poem ke roop me ..
Kya baat hain
you can blog one of your drafts.. and ask the readers of your blog to complete it
btw nice work..
tried that once before … didn’t work out …
BTW thanks …
Nice nice ..
Poor snake.BTW dont forget to feed milk to snake house in a nearby temple. That is what we do after killing a snake,otherwise five headed snakes will dance in the dreams and attempt to poke our eyes.
@@nks: Sometimes I also feel that my poem is incomplete but more often its not incomplete, but complete with respect to what I wanted to convey…!
Snake?! *shudders*
I think they should be killed when seen
In between the concept of poem was interesting.