The Betrayal !!

15 May

The day I first saw you

I knew we were made for each other,

How can you forget

all those nights we spent together.


spending hours in a row,

I never took my eyes off you,

I forgot the world

Lost in you I went cuckoo.


Oh I was so blind

Now I feel like a dumbhead

should have seen it coming

you and my best friend in bed


All that love and affaction

all the money I spend on your accessories

sitting on my lap taking

you use to take away my worries


I did something wrong

Or was I just not enough

Were you bored of me

or you needed more stuff


Why Did you cheat on me

Go on, now tell me the truth

you slept with someone else

You disloyal, Lenovo Intel i7 Notebook !!

6 Responses to “The Betrayal !!”

  1. Daud Khan May 16, 2011 at 2:14 pm #

    very nice buddy , ur work is good

    • @nks May 17, 2011 at 8:15 am #

      thanks πŸ™‚

  2. vrikmace May 16, 2011 at 5:32 pm #

    For a second there I thought it was about a person and not a gadget. 😦 Its really well written and quite a surprise ending but I don’t know why I feel disappointed… i guess its just me and not your poem !! πŸ˜›
    Keep up the good work. πŸ™‚

    • @nks May 17, 2011 at 3:32 pm #

      he he he … this is the best you can expect from a geeky techi … πŸ™‚

      And I see my laptop is nothing less than a galfrnd too me, it’s prettier, funny, sexy at time, and shuts up when I want πŸ˜€

  3. Ghost Runner June 28, 2011 at 10:00 am #

    wtf? I thought it was your female per dog who got pregnant by a male dog …so you were scolding it

    • @nks June 28, 2011 at 10:53 am #

      wow …. never I thought of it that way …. If I remove the last line … what you said would make complete sense πŸ˜€

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