the killer

18 May

She was standing there,

Looking at me with disgust

I’ve seen anger before

But this expression was first



I was thinking of some excuse

But the brain was jammed

And she was staring judgmentally

Like I’ve been condemned



The crowd around me

Was unaware of her presence

They were celebrating loudly

But I was covered with silence



The feeling of triumph

In a click, vanished

The cheers were like

I was getting punished



I can no longer look

into her eyes full of hate

Coz I killed her mate

Just because he was a snake



PS:- It actualy happend in front of me, 9 years back when i was in school … The poor creature, unfortunately found its way to the playground from the bushes it was hiding with another one. And I couldn’t stop my “trying to be daredevil” friends…

PS:– I don’t if the other one was a she … assumed coz it add some drama to poem … 😀

PS:— posting a poem after ages … no. of incomplete poems is around 12 … why can’t i complete my poems…


7 Responses to “the killer”

  1. Kunal May 19, 2009 at 6:05 am #

    Nagin ki script, poem ke roop me ..
    Kya baat hain 🙂

  2. Abheet May 19, 2009 at 10:55 am #

    you can blog one of your drafts.. and ask the readers of your blog to complete it 🙂

    btw nice work..

    • @nks May 20, 2009 at 10:25 am #

      tried that once before … didn’t work out …

      BTW thanks …

  3. Vani May 26, 2009 at 12:07 pm #

    Nice nice ..

    Poor snake.BTW dont forget to feed milk to snake house in a nearby temple. That is what we do after killing a snake,otherwise five headed snakes will dance in the dreams and attempt to poke our eyes.

  4. Abhishek May 31, 2009 at 10:33 am #

    @@nks: Sometimes I also feel that my poem is incomplete but more often its not incomplete, but complete with respect to what I wanted to convey…!

  5. Ayesha May 31, 2009 at 8:14 pm #

    Snake?! *shudders*

    I think they should be killed when seen 🙄

    In between the concept of poem was interesting.

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