She was standing there,
Looking at me with disgust
I’ve seen anger before
But this expression was first
.
.
I was thinking of some excuse
But the brain was jammed
And she was staring judgmentally
Like I’ve been condemned
.
.
The crowd around me
Was unaware of her presence
They were celebrating loudly
But I was covered with silence
.
.
The feeling of triumph
In a click, vanished
The cheers were like
I was getting punished
.
.
I can no longer look
into her eyes full of hate
Coz I killed her mate
Just because he was a snake
.
.
PS:- It actualy happend in front of me, 9 years back when i was in school … The poor creature, unfortunately found its way to the playground from the bushes it was hiding with another one. And I couldn’t stop my “trying to be daredevil” friends…
PS:– I don’t if the other one was a she … assumed coz it add some drama to poem … 😀
PS:— posting a poem after ages … no. of incomplete poems is around 12 … why can’t i complete my poems…
nothin... much 
Nagin ki script, poem ke roop me ..
Kya baat hain 🙂
😀
you can blog one of your drafts.. and ask the readers of your blog to complete it 🙂
btw nice work..
tried that once before … didn’t work out …
BTW thanks …
Nice nice ..
Poor snake.BTW dont forget to feed milk to snake house in a nearby temple. That is what we do after killing a snake,otherwise five headed snakes will dance in the dreams and attempt to poke our eyes.
@@nks: Sometimes I also feel that my poem is incomplete but more often its not incomplete, but complete with respect to what I wanted to convey…!
Snake?! *shudders*
I think they should be killed when seen 🙄
In between the concept of poem was interesting.